Hi ][ndy,
Welcome and Congrats on your first fedora!
I agree with Bartram (and most people here who know their hats) that the key to getting really constructive instruction and opinion is to get that hat on your HEAD and take some more pictures.
The hat will
always look a bit different on your noggin than sitting on top of another hat... or on top of anything else, really.
If you're the shyer type of person, no problem... just get the next few photos taken showing the hat from your forehead up if you'd prefer. We're not saying you have to show us what kinda chin you've got... but the hat
will reveal where it needs adjusting more accurately once it's on your head.
Hope this helps a little.
In the meantime though, from looking at it I definitely think you DO have a hat there that
can get itself to how you want it to look.
Cheers,
Mitch